Here are my first new attempts:



The Scratch is one of my favorite creations. She badly needed more clarity, though. This new sketch gives her more of the animal savagery she needs, but I went WAY overboard! She's not a werewolf!
Under Girl was another of my faves, and of my readers, but she needed more personality. This sketch is definitely going in the right direction, but it's a little too "hentai." Dial it back a bit, and she'll be just right.
I really like the swing at redesigning these characters you've done. I'd definitely agree with your feeling on Undergirl though. Dial it back a little... I liked how she was before, but also like the tweaks you've given her. I can't wait to see more.
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